I wish I'd been able to read the Fleetway comics. They seem good, especially when I find a story like this. Great take on Amy's smotions!

Demonic Super Sonic? What is THAT?!

Is that some fusion between Super Sonic and Dark Sonic? Where the dark side is in control? Or is his fur red? Or what? Cause I have no idea who 'Demonic Super Sonic' is...

Hmm. I've never really thought of Super as a particually deep character in the Fleetaway series, considering his role as the "psychopath that pops up from time to time." In light of this the oneshot may have been stretching things. Still, Amy's relationship with Sonic in Fleetaway is significantly different from the games or any other media for that matter, so I guess this could have bearing...

Anyway, it was good overall, it's just that the concept itself generally felt unrealistic in a sense. Still, kudos for originality.

nice fic. =]

Nicely written, even though I'm not entirely convinced by the pairing. Super as done in Fleetway just doesn't seem to have enough personality other than "raving nut" to really fix on I don't think.

Maybe later in the series post-Ebony I could see it.

Very well written I agree. Would be nice if there were more stories like this.
Keep it up!

Very nice story. Fleetway Super Sonic is one of my favorite charcters. Never thought of this pairing before though, it's odd yet cool. Can't see too many errors on your part, everything looks good. All in all a short nice story.

~A Lunar Angel~

Wow, I hardly ever see fics like this. It's different, and...well, I like it! Nice job here.

Why doesn't anyone else think of this? I -love- this story. I myself have a Super/Ebony story in my head, and think it's cute. I hope to read more from ya soon!

~~Kat

what an odd idea! I must say, that amy of yours DOES seem slightly disturbed (or suicidal) but then again, your fleetway super sonic seems nicer than most...anyway, I have to say you explored the topic rather nicely and added a lot of aspects and perspectives. while maintaining a style nice to read. cool work! :)

whats fleetway?

What an interesting idea...Amy falling for an evil sonic instead of good. At least thats the impression I got. I always did wonder...Nice fic! Well written!

Nyago

Interesting. Not many spelling errors, or...I didn't spot any. I've never seen this couple before. Hm. You didn't do to bad at it. Good job.