Please update soon! I really want to know what happens! :)

I demand another chapter for this story. It is too good to just be left alone uncompleted. I've read the entire series and to get up to this point and have it stop is really disappointing especially with all these teasing flash forwards and the many years it's been in progress. Another Jak game is coming out soon and it would be nice to have an update occur simultaneously. You have a lot of stories that are left uncompleted, please don't let this story become one of them.

wow i love all your stories and i'm really liking this one. Please update soon, i can't wait to read more.

There is only 2 words I have to say LOVE IT!
I'm so happy to finally see this story updated again and I am looking forward to another update =)

xox tinker bell xox

Yay! updates! But I must admit I had to go through the entire thing again so I could remember what had happened! But it was good, certainly a twist at the end that Jak would lead his army into a trap. Looking forward to your next update LES!

poor Jak, please update soon

Yes! Thank you an update, really great story, great chapter and this is only the beginning of the war. I'd like to know a lot more about Teran and Amalia's story cause I really like those characters but I'm sure thats upcoming. And I agree, best Jak and Daxter writer i've ever seen, Never Stop.

Great chapter. Sorry that i haven't been updating my story, but I've been having major writer's block with it adn I still have to sort out the different Racing Leagues and races. Again, great chapter and I will try to get a move on with my story.

RHP: DAMN-IT! I HATE Marauders! GARGH! But now I have a chance to write something else:

You! Are! Amazing! I consider you the #1 writer of Jak and Daxter fan fiction! EVER! You inspire me to go write more (crappy) stories! I LOVE'D YOU! I honor the ground you walk on! You are a Jak and Daxter GOD!! XD

Best chapter in the saga.

At this point, this story is just so brilliant and spectacular and all other praising words I can think of. I love this story and I was wondering if, since I am under the impression that you made up the Level Ten Channeler information, may I also use that in my own Jak and Daxter fic (which will take a while to get on the site). Your ideas to me are better than anything I could think of. I may also be able to come up with a couple more Eco types, if you're interested. If you are, PM me and wait about three days for a reply. If you don't get a reply, I'm not having any luck. But, being one of the smartest kids in my school, I am sure that in a matter of three or maybe four days, i can come up with a new variety of Eco that could prove useful and/or interesting. Again, I love this story so far and I will continue reaing it later on tonight. I want to actually start thinking about those Eco varieties right now. Thanks for listening.

Still amazing stuff, I absolutely love this series. Hands down this series are my favorite fanfictions of all time.

Please update again soon its been to long, please do it for all your begging fans, were to anxious and its been a little less than 2 years since this story was first introduced to us all and thats how long we've been teased with this plot and been here wondering. Again great stuff.

WOW YOU'RE BACK!
AWESOME CHAPTER! AMAZING STORY!! PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN!

SQUE! I so happy! Finally! Not a huge fan of short chapters, but whatever! An update! Woohoo! But a question I have, is how far away is Teran and Amalia's rooms from Jak and Keira's? Just curiousity of course. And Daxter's help with changing the sheets! Amazing!

Finnally!! Jesus christ its been a while p.s. update Alternate Universe please and/or read one of my stories!