Great job!

So much emotion built up into a short piece of work. Worthy of applause...

I really liked this. A scene we never got to see, I liked the small characteristics you put in like Miwako's pink bubblewrap and talking in her third person way.

The nostalgia is thick too, especially the way it reminds me of my own adolescence that's fading away. Thankyou. A sweet, sad piece.

Wow, great emotion. The last line was the most heart wrenching part and I think you captured the whole emotion perfectly.

Loved it.

Perfection. I really loved the raw emotion you imparted to this piece. Kudos! ^_^

Really good really really good

Hey,

that was... very, very nostalgic... it just made me feel sad all over again... oh, well... george's pursuing what he had always wanted... but still... I love it, i really, really do.

mad IZZE