Great

That was amazing! Thank you. I like that you told the story from Jim's POV.

I especially liked the phrase 'our Sara'. :)

I like this from Brass's point of view. Great story!

-(had a little glitch in the 1st paragraph)

AW that is the sweetest thing ive ever seen written. i cant even say, i agree that brass is like her father, ohh i really loved it!

Re-read your first paragraph.

Is that really the way you meant to write it?

With repeats?

Otherwise, this is a well written story.

Brass is such a good friend to Gil,

and father figure for Sara.

Sara will be fine.

*tear* Great!

oh wonderful point of view from brass, always thought he would be the first to figure it out! great fic!

really nice to read a story with Brass telling it. well done