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| GimmeABeat 2007-07-22 ch 5,  | abuseWow, I just found this one and it's great. Please continue; I need more. |
| Mariel3 2007-07-17 ch 5, | abuseAh! An update! Sorry for being so slow to review - I'm trying to get caught up, though. I liked this chapter very much - the opening was riveting, Bill's solid presence and being there for Laura was perfectly written. Thanks for a good read! |
| carolann 2007-07-11 ch 5, | abuseGreat chapter. Thanks so much for sharing. |
| Galactica Brit 2007-06-04 ch 4, | abuseAw, I just love Bill and Laura and this is just gorgeous. Love the way you have them interacting, reads true to the show. And of course Saul and Kara equally as part of the family. Love it, hope theres some more... |
| Mariel3 2007-06-04 ch 4, | abuse"It's okay, Laura, I'm not going anywhere." What a perfect line! Thanks for the update and the interesting read. I enjoyed this chapter a lot. Especially the opening scene, where Bill is watching Laura. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for posting! |
| Mariel3 2007-05-27 ch 3, | abuseThis was a great chapter! I enjoyed the dialogue between them at the beginning when Laura and Bill first meet, and his putting one and one together and finally going back to confront her was well done. I also really appreciated the way you gently placed the fact that they had done more than cuddle on New Caprica! You slipped that in perfectly naturally. Now I'm ready to settle down and see what you're going to do next. I'm looking forward to it immensely. Thanks for posting! |
| Grammar Maven 2007-05-21 ch 1, | abuseGood beginning. I like where this is heading. Hope you update soon! |
| Mariel3 2007-05-21 ch 1, | abuseVery nice beginning! I'm looking to seeing where you're going to take us with this story. Thanks for posting! |