|Reviews for The Forbidden Shadow|
| bubble.duckie 6/23/11 . chapter 7
I forgot to say that Kiwi is so cute! Reminded me a lot of Viper in Kung Fu Panda! Sort of like Kiyohime too! That's probably the reason why I collected the Mcdonalds Happy meal toys because Viper is there haha!
| bubble.duckie 6/23/11 . chapter 5
Talk about whirlwind romance! Hmm I'm still kinda lost maybe I have to re-read this to better understand. You are writing ShizNat though so that means I'll cheer you on. Yay! Gogogo!
| bubble.duckie 6/22/11 . chapter 3
What? She's blind! Oho! I guess I now know how she'd get back her sight!
| bubble.duckie 6/21/11 . chapter 1
Wow one after the other! I've recently finished a MH angtsy fic and here's another one! D mm that stupid SOB doing that to Nat! Let me at him and I'm gonna effin' Kiki him! Affected much!
| Ginukuemau 6/13/09 . chapter 11
This story really confuses me but please continue it and please try to make it a little less confusing
| Ume sama 1/19/09 . chapter 1
This a really great story. I really wish you would continue it.
| yui1808 7/30/08 . chapter 11
one year of no update?
| yui1808 7/30/08 . chapter 7
| yui1808 7/30/08 . chapter 3
ei do you still need a beta? anyway, how come you mentioned that it was her first time seeing the color green? she's blind right, not color blind...
| yui1808 7/29/08 . chapter 1
that was harsh... damn than bastard! i hate father's like that if you can even call him a father...
| MelodicFlan 7/26/07 . chapter 8
Japanese names or American names? or random? .; I'll just make up a random name .
Host: Katsuragi, Junpei (last, first)
Girl: Cattefre (catafree for pronounciation), Karen
Boy: Chan, Hiro
| MelodicFlan 7/26/07 . chapter 7
. I'm a little lost o.o; Where's the SHIZNATNESS? Lol .; Sigh I'm getting impatient, I have my own Shiznat stories to write and post but I'm too lazy. I've even completed them too lol .. My last fanfics was like 5 years ago? Talk about poor grammar...I was looking back at my previous works, and I was like OMFG bad bad bad quality O.O;. Hmm there are some grammatical errors in this chapter; maybe I'll list them next time
| MelodicFlan 7/26/07 . chapter 6
Why is Kiwi not Kiyo? I'm just wondering, but I don't have anything against it. O.O Talk about rush or maybe love at first sight .; That's why I never liked Shakespeare lol. I like ShizNat though O.O;
| MelodicFlan 7/26/07 . chapter 5
O.O; eh o.O; The confession was so fast O.O; But good job lol o.o;...
| MelodicFlan 7/26/07 . chapter 3
T_T? Why doesn't this have more reviews O.O;! That's bad! This story is really nice so far. Keep it up and update soon!