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   bubble.duckie 6/23/11 . chapter 7I forgot to say that Kiwi is so cute! Reminded me a lot of Viper in Kung Fu Panda! Sort of like Kiyohime too! That's probably the reason why I collected the Mcdonalds Happy meal toys because Viper is there haha! |
| bubble.duckie 6/23/11 . chapter 5 Talk about whirlwind romance! Hmm I'm still kinda lost maybe I have to re-read this to better understand. You are writing ShizNat though so that means I'll cheer you on. Yay! Gogogo! |
| bubble.duckie 6/22/11 . chapter 3 What? She's blind! Oho! I guess I now know how she'd get back her sight! |
| bubble.duckie 6/21/11 . chapter 1 Wow one after the other! I've recently finished a MH angtsy fic and here's another one! D mm that stupid SOB doing that to Nat! Let me at him and I'm gonna effin' Kiki him! Affected much! |
| Ginukuemau 6/13/09 . chapter 11 This story really confuses me but please continue it and please try to make it a little less confusing |
| Ume sama 1/19/09 . chapter 1 This a really great story. I really wish you would continue it. |
| yui1808 7/30/08 . chapter 11 one year of no update? |
| yui1808 7/30/08 . chapter 7 creepy chapter... |
| yui1808 7/30/08 . chapter 3 ei do you still need a beta? anyway, how come you mentioned that it was her first time seeing the color green? she's blind right, not color blind... |
| yui1808 7/29/08 . chapter 1 that was harsh... damn than bastard! i hate father's like that if you can even call him a father... |
| MelodicFlan 7/26/07 . chapter 8 Japanese names or American names? or random? .; I'll just make up a random name . Host: Katsuragi, Junpei (last, first) Girl: Cattefre (catafree for pronounciation), Karen Boy: Chan, Hiro lol |
| MelodicFlan 7/26/07 . chapter 7 . I'm a little lost o.o; Where's the SHIZNATNESS? Lol .; Sigh I'm getting impatient, I have my own Shiznat stories to write and post but I'm too lazy. I've even completed them too lol .. My last fanfics was like 5 years ago? Talk about poor grammar...I was looking back at my previous works, and I was like OMFG bad bad bad quality O.O;. Hmm there are some grammatical errors in this chapter; maybe I'll list them next time |
| MelodicFlan 7/26/07 . chapter 6 Why is Kiwi not Kiyo? I'm just wondering, but I don't have anything against it. O.O Talk about rush or maybe love at first sight .; That's why I never liked Shakespeare lol. I like ShizNat though O.O; |
| MelodicFlan 7/26/07 . chapter 5 O.O; eh o.O; The confession was so fast O.O; But good job lol o.o;... |
| MelodicFlan 7/26/07 . chapter 3 T_T? Why doesn't this have more reviews O.O;! That's bad! This story is really nice so far. Keep it up and update soon! |
