 mhgood 2009-10-28 . chapter 7Yet another story that has kept me up way past my bedtime! This is amazing. Your characterizations, your prose, your plot, your descriptions, the way you plot the movement of the story--all perfect. Guh. I'm just speechless.
You've definitely created a wonderful Charlie and a believable Hermione. Every member of the Weasley family is spot-on, and I gotta say, I really appreciate how you were meticulous with the details of the girlfriends/wives of the Weasleys, making sure to display their varying characteristics, and not blending their personalities into one--they're all portayed uniquely. Attention to detail! It's great!
And Jonas is such a fun character, too!
Thanks for a good read! You had me alternately in tears, bursting out with laughter, cringing in horror, and anxious for the future with each passing sentence. Brilliant, really. |
 Clover Bay 2009-10-10 . chapter 7This is one of my favorite Hermione/Charlie stories. I like the detailed path you have for them and the experiences they share on the reserve. Very creative and well-written.
Clover |
 LadyMoontime 2009-09-21 . chapter 7 i absolutely LOVED your story. it made me go 'awh', it made me laugh and cry in both sadness and joy. well done on such an excellent story! it's not often that i come across such a well-written story, with exceptionally well rounded characters and a story line that isn't sappy or boring. well done for keeping me in suspense for so long towards the end! i was SO worried that Hermione wouldn't wake up!
Thanks again. |
 VampricDragoness 2009-09-15 . chapter 7I know that this story has been completed for almost two years now, but I just found it and I have to say that it was wonderful. |
 wickedlovely731 2009-09-02 . chapter 7i really enjoy the story, i laugh and cry, i felt in love with Charlie and Bill, i really love the way you wrote, it made me feel as if i was there living every chapter. It was perfect. You are a great writer. |
 Witchy-grrl 2009-08-05 . chapter 7WOW. I gotta say...WOW. ::mind-boggled:: You've breathed life into a 'ship that most people would never consider, and I gotta applaud you for how absolutely realistic it was, and the simply BRILLIANT progression of their relationship. Just...WOW. :D I don't know what else to say...well, just that you are ABSOLUTELY one of my new favorite authors!! |
 sparkyCSI 2009-08-03 . chapter 7This was simply and truly fantastic. You managed to bring a depth to their characters that many writers don't. I smiled when I read that Hermione was pregnant (after having guessed it from the chapter before) and my heart was in my throat when when was injured.
Great job! And I am so happy that it had a happy ending. :) |
 lovedrher 2009-07-30 . chapter 7Oh my, I LOVED IT!
I mostly, if not entirely :), love all of your stories. You have a wonderful writing style, with great narrative elements that makes me feel what the characters are feeling and going through. Your way with words and emotions makes any male character perfect for Hermione, which is not something anyone can accomplish. I really hope you are using this talent for more than fan fiction, because if you do, I would be pleased and honored to read something written by you.
After my praise, I must begin my demands :):
Please do continue with the stories that aren’t complete. I am really into your stories, the way you beautifully write isn’t something easily found and your plots are marvelous. I get so involved when reading them, I am simply awed. I have been reading your stories since the end of 2006 and simply feel in love with them. All one-shots, I have read. No matter who you pair with Hermione, I just can’t stop reading.
Returning to my humble demands, I would enjoy (a lot) reading the next chapter(s) of:
Blood Is Thicker Than Tears
A Family Affair
Growing, and thus Summer Haven
The Werewolf Tamer
While you were gone
Secret Life
Thank you and I wish you the best of luck in all your enterprises,
Love,
Liz |
 pwrmom2 2009-07-11 . chapter 7I never thought of a Charlie/Hermione pairing. I loved this story |
 missevilprincess 2009-07-02 . chapter 7Ashby is so adorable. *sigh*
I hope Jonas will make another appearance in one of your stories!
I'm in love with him. ^^ |
 missevilprincess 2009-07-02 . chapter 6The story about Drew the Dragon with the whatever is so cute!
The whole thing is making me cry, even if this is my 53697th time reading this story. |
 RandomObsessivePsychoFangirl 2009-06-17 . chapter 7This was a fantastic story. The characters were characterized amazingly and all of the emotions felt so real. It didn't seem like a story to me, it seemed like so much more. I absolutely adored it! Your writing is amazing and I can only hope that you continue to write here. You're an amazing author. :)
~Amanda |
 LixxyChan 2009-05-28 . chapter 7Aww, that was excellent! Definitely a five star piece!
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I was so sad when Hermione wasn't waking up; Charlie was so heartbroken! Brilliant plot and perfectly written.
Xx |
 hi 2009-05-08 . chapter 7 loved the story... i was so scared at the beginning of the chapter that hermione was still in the coma ... beautiful story thought best charlie/hermoine fic i've read ... can u pls update "while you were gone" soon |
 hermioneism 2009-05-02 . chapter 7Wow. What a magnificent story. I have never read a story with this pairing, and this was AMAZING. Completely believable. I wish there were more chapters, so these feelings of awe I have can go on and on.
I read this one straight through today, and I almost never do that, usually spending my Saturdays getting things done around the house and whatnot. I laughed, I cried, I felt my heart swell and drop from the angst... Truly fantastic.
Off to read more of your work now, and anxiously awaiting an update (still) of several...
:) |