PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!
PLEASE UPDATE! I can't stand how long its taking you to update this story and this other one I saw on your profile with Ed's bastard father starving him and forcing him into prostitution. I'm not demanding, I'm begging. I have become adicted to your stories and I'm going through painful de-tox that I don't need. I swear. So please start working on them as soon as posible. I really love this.

Hiya! C:

Great fic, Kaitlin! Holy crap, you sure do write a lot, I've noticed. THIS HAS LIKE, 453789609 WORDS ALREADY, SRSLY.

...Moving on. o.o

I love how characters not commonly used are here. Pinako? CHECK, AND A LOTTA SCREENTIME, TOO. Russell? Check, YES, ILOVERUSSELLYAY. ♥ Rose? CHECK, EVEN THOUGH SHE'S NOT THAT COOL AND HER HAIR REMINDS ME OF ICE CREAM. And Sciezka, who I am fond of because she kinda looks stupid like me, lololol. And even those CRAZY pedophiles Yoki and Marcoh! God, if Fletcher made a surprise appearance in this chapter, it'd be like a side character fruit salad of AWESOME.

And Edward is as emo and bitchy as usual. Yay! If I had a friend like him, spouting crap like, "AT LEAST J00 HAVE A DADDY," I'd probably set his hair on fire. Seriously. But knowing crazy, fictional ** have to deal with him makes the underage little boy all the more appealing.

And the fact he's near our age kinda freaks me out. o.o I remember when we were first getting into Fullmetal Alchemist, and I always thought, "WOW, THOSE GUYS ARE SO BIG AND OLD AND I'M NEVER GOING TO BE LIKE THAT BECAUSE I'M AGELESS LIKE PETER PAN AND MICHAEL JACKSON."

WRONG-O.

Anyway, great story. C: Keep it up! Remember to pimp your story to people whenever you get the chance like, ever. Oh, and THANK YOU FOR THE REALLY CUTE PICTURE OF US YOU DREW. ♥

--KT

I am quite intrigued by the story so far, I like the description of the group. Do tell me, will this story end up with a Roy/Ed pairing? I certainly hope so, they work well together. But anyway, fantastic job, and I wish you luck in writing the next chapter!

0.0 o sounds good! Can't wait to read more!

Um...you have 8. Can't you round it up to 10? Please? I love you?

OMG That's so awesome!Please continue!

this sounds like a really cool idea. I hope you continue with it!

i like it :P

ah!
now u got me all excited for ur story! ><
go go go!

;D

o.o Hey, it sounds like a cool idea. > Write it out and lets us read it dammit!

Dayum, Kaitlin. That was short, sweet, and deep (LIKE ED AND ROY'S SEX LIVES, LMAO). ;D The song lyrics really add to the suspense and well, originality that I know this fic will have.

I swear, from this day forward, I will NEVER put off reviewing one of your fics. YOU CAN QUOTE ME, MAN, IF I PULL THE "I'm busy" CARD AGAIN.

Keep it up! ♥

its sound really interesting. theres a few things i dont get well like if this story is when ed is this world or if it has nothing to do with the series, if the person that is with ed is huhemhein(sp?)...but i think they will be answer later on in the story. like i said the story is very interesting and leave wanting to know more. well ill be waiting for the next chap to come out.