The name of ths and the last line work so well!

They are so creepily entertaining!

The 'don't die' line was so in character!

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Oh my... that was... horrid. I could see that last chapter happening, really. god that gave me shivers

These are brilliant. Hilarious and in character. I hope you continue, I quite enjoyed these five.

Yum. *evil wink*

You made them creepy enough!

well, it should be more conected to the story and that wasn't much of a spoiler. It was good but the chapters were to short and had nothing to do with each other A- material for a Neil Gaiman work.

Short and sweet. What drabbles are for. I think we all delight a little in the creepiness of Croupe and Vandemar, and you surely did them justice. :)

-Harliq

Uhh... "as he beamed and his tailored suit"?

Otherwise, nice. Surprisingly sweet for them. Like the idea that Mr Croup is more eager to get back to the, uh, gore. Vandemar likes the simple things... like lizards. And gore.

Aww. A sweet interlude. How idyllic. It actually made me happy, and not in the ghoulish sense that yours usually do. So, was the unexpected guest the delivery man who brought the new suit? :D

*screams out loud and bangs on laptop, frightening a small child nearby*

these two men are the most deliciously wicked characters since... well, since ever, as far as I know. thank you for writing about them! they are my favorite neverwhere chars.

Short, but nice. I like the description of Mr Vandemar's tongue. XD Nice characterisation, too, except for I'm not sure about Mr Croup being so... *obvious* about "flesh to cut through".

Please keep writing!

Oh, these are great! _ Croup and Vandemar are very cool characters, and I knew there had to be someone out there who wrote them... and you write them *very* well. Your charcterisation is as closer to the book as is possible in fanfic, I think! Any chance of more chapters?

...wow. Oh, man, that's an insane image. Nicely worked so that it's macabre, even grotesque, but not overly graphic, and I love how you can build up a little tension even in such a short piece.

The phrase "not necessarily a tree, but it was a gigantic tree" seems a bit contradictory, though. Still. Great stuff overall.

What excellent characterization! You seem to have the two down particularly well. "[...] many more throats to cut and lots more blood to spill"-totally in keeping with what we saw in Neverwhere, without having been lifted straight from the book. The same goes for the rest of the vignette. I shall most certainly check back for more. You have a fan.