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| severus lily love 2007-06-14 ch 1,  | abuseO.O Evil Ginny!! But never like that before...o exciting!! lol I must say that was very creative. I liked it very much. The only thing i have a problem with was the past/present comparison. If you had made it more of a paragraph, I think it would have had a bigger effect on the reader. I thought it was a tad...blunt..for lack of a better word. But that was great! |
| manda-hplover4life 2007-06-10 ch 1, | abusevery good!! i was sad when it ended!! you write beutifully...tho im not used to reading present tense it was still realy realy good! |
| Alex Demonica 2007-05-27 ch 1, | abuseDude your story is good but you need paragaphs.Like put long sentets together. THats what it needs. I just trying to be nice. |
| anna 2007-05-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseI needn't say anymore than... awesome! well done! luv anna |
| x.eTak.x 2007-05-24 ch 1, | abuseO I love it. I was right into this story. Its like a steamy romance novel without the smut! Please I beg you to continue!! |
| TrixCuaks 2007-05-23 ch 1, | abuseGod, this is one of the best D7G fic's i`ve read ever, i loved it, everything abou it is wonderfull. congratulations on a clever and well done fic. |
| Next to Something 2007-05-22 ch 1, | abuseDelicious. I would highly recommend you make this into a full length fic. It's so dark; a very different take on this coupling. Simply fantastic. |
| Aimsaru 2007-05-22 ch 1, | abuseI liked it, it was interesting and dark. |
| moonlight152 2007-05-21 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is amazing. one of the best pieces i have read. very well done. would like another chapter or more? love it! |