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Just Thinking
2007-06-09
ch 3,
abuseCute update!
YellowDisease
2007-06-08
ch 2,
abusethis is totally awesome! I love it!
Just Thinking
2007-05-22
ch 2,
abuseThank you for continuing! They are so cute; I loved the banter once again.
Just Thinking
2007-05-22
ch 1,
abuseI love these two! You wrote their banter perfectly.

One thing:
"Mandy turned to live." Did you mean leave? I mean I hope she does live, for a very long time, but...

Great job overall, Mandy is my favorite lab rat, so I am excited to see something about her. Can't wait for chapter 2!
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