Liked it very much. Well written torture fics when they're about my favorite character always give me a rush. I applaud your courage for not flinching away from the gore, even though your friend may think it wasn't enough. Would have liked a bit of rape too.

Wow, that was very well written, and impressive; however, the last line makes it slightly confusing- does that mean Ban's dead and Ginjis insane, Jackal's dead by Ginji, by Ban, or was Ban being a prick? Not sure which, could you please specify? Again, up until that point I'd say otherwise.

This was a good story, twisted but all the more amazing because of it. The ending was a little choppy and confusing, and I'm still not sure if I've entirely figured out what happened. But beyond that, this fic really is great. Akabane is such a sinister fellow. You did a great job with Ginji, too; reader can easily feel Ginji's terror and helplessness, yet also how he still has the strength of will to try not to scream at the pain. Good job.