Kawaii!

Cute chapter, it was very funny!

I thought this story was excellente, though I do think you rushed through the plot a little too quickly, maybe you should have dragged out the part where their mind and body was linked together a little more.

aw i loved it *sniff sniff*

omg i remember reading this on ! wait was it there? i honestly don't remember but i love this story!

really good story:D a job well done

awesome...did u write anymore like this

cute funny lovely...
i love it.
thnx.

that was hilarious, i loved it :)

Oh I liked this story. It was cool how they remembered their past lives together. Such a sweet story. Great work. =)

I have never had a story make me cry out of happiness, never! untill i read yours, your such a good writer, this was by far the best sailor moon story i have ever read.

This was AWESOME!

All right, let me preface this by saying I really did like the story, as a whole, but there were alot of things about it that made me cringe as well.

First off, there was so much dialogue and not that much description. It seemed like scenes were jumping all over the place. For example, Minako goes to talk to Usagi in her bedroom and then all of a sudden they are hopping into an elevator! I mean, it was a little confusing for me to read this because I had to "imagine" what I had possibly missed there, you know?

Also, I would have liked to see more of Usagi and Mamoru bonded together, get them into a few sticky situations. Like, how Usagi just stayed at Makoto's...no call to her parents or anything? Or what happens when they have to go to school?

I also felt that Mamoru's feelings were a bit confusing. He was disappointed to discover that Usagi was Sailor Moon, but then at the arcade he kissed her? What were the repurcutions there? Why didn't Usagi freak out a little more? I mean, she hates the guy, right?

I guess those are all of my suggestions for now, but please don't read this as a negative review! I really did enjoy the story and usually only leave reviews when I feel that the author has great potential! So please just read this as constructive and use it to learn and grow from! Keep writing!!

hi, i just wanna say... I LOVE THIS STORY! it was really funny at the beginning, and it was so cute during the middle, and now at the end, aw... i liked it... it was interesting, funny, romantic, and there was a happy ending... :) I LOVED IT!

Katie :)

I have read this over and over. I love it, its amazing!