The story was kind of interesting, I felt sorry for Forrest and little Forrest and the whole missing graduation thing.

But the end was horrible, and pointless in my opinion.

Really sad :(

Hey that was awesome so sad

...o_O well that's ONE way to end it! Dang. Nicely written though...

It's a good idea, and your writing is pretty good too.

But it's too short. The story is so compact that it just jumps around and you really don't even feel sad for Forrest Junior in the end, because you don't have the chance to know him.

The dialogue is also a bit static.

But like I said, it's still good, and the idea is really good.

Uh...can I say speechless...it was um...interesting I suppose. The way you tied in the Mobius with your point of going back to the beginning was clever I thought :) It moved fast though, over all it was interesting.

I thought that was really good, and cleverly thought out. I reckon the ending could've been a little more detailed, as it seemed almost rushed to get the idea of the end out, but otherwise it was great. Excuse my crappy explanation skills there to.

That's so sad poor Forrest

Fate can be so cruel.