Woah, that was deep . . . I really liked it. It was so sweet, in a rejecting way. Pure beauty.

Its not bad, but it could be more eloquent.
I like the end.

You got one thing right. The pairing was VERY suprising!
But the fic was well written.

wow, i love the Artemis/Opal paring it's so non-canon but so in-canon at the same time, great job!