Woah, that is an ominous thought. Great little short story, thanks!

that was just awesome.

just wow.

Is he completely and utterly insane? Does he even have a plan on how to find Dean and then get back out cause no way they'll let him stroll in, grab Dean and walk out. Good work.

Oh, that was just painful (in a good way.) Poor Sammy.

I really love your stories. I am a huge fan of Supernatural and this story is one of the best responses to AHBL I've read. I also enjoyed your Numb3rs crossover. Please write more!

You know? I can so see this happening... wow.

Hm... very interesting and just - wow!

Thanks : )

...This should be canon. You are awesome.

*whistles*

Hot damn.

I'm . . . utterly speechless.

But still, DAMN.

Yes! Please put out the next part of Take A Long Line! And this fic was awesome! I loved it! Nice work! :D
Ana

I liked the story and I also think that Sam would try whatever was necessary to try to save Dean. Would you consider continuing it?

First off, LOVE THE TITLE.

I had just about given up on Sam until I ran across this story!

Finally, Sam has taken his self-centered head out of his ** and looked around! I thought he would never get it together!

>He was so proud of the faith that he saw Dean had in him, that Sam missed the underlying current of tolerant condescension for months.<

>Now there's only one left standing, and that's not the way it's meant to be<
>Sam Winchester has the Colt in his hand and he's not going to accept that. He's simply not going to.<
>Sam looks back at the door and squares his shoulders. Everything's ready. He's ready.<
>One Winchester, Colt in hand.<
>And the Gates of Hell shall open<

This is the fic I have been waiting for. Sam will always be the little brother, but now he's deserving of the Winchester name.

Wonderful, wonderful job! Thank You.

Cat

Wow...very wow. Great story.
I can just see that darned stubborn Dean running for the hell hounds. It's just so Dean, I have to shake my head in resignation at him.
Sam would do anything for Dean, I think alot of people just don't give him enough credit that way, and yep I believe he would even open the gates of hell and drag that brother of his back.
Thanks for the story and looking forward to your other one to be finished. No pressure!!;)

That was awesome.
Mind if I quote you? 'One Winchester, Colt in hand. And the Gates of Hell shall open." That's one hell of a line!

GULP! omg, pleasepleasepleaseplease tell me this isnt a one shot! pwease? this is fantastic, and the last two lines are heart-stoppers! PLEASE write more!

R U SERIOUS?! That's it?! Come on, you could add just a little bit more, and I'll be happy! I loved it! :)