... nyaahahahaha... sorry about that fit there but that's the only way i can describe that. that was so well written, not like a lot of the n00by stuff you see on here.

i have a real thing for childhood itasasu, especially when they're not having lemon scenes. i love the way you've written them both- sasuke's childish defiance against itachi's apathy, it just works so well. plus the last line made me physically shiver. well done, this is awesome.

Itachi was multi-talented... sewing is not completely out there!
Great story though, I love the way you put Sasuke's thoughts.

I like the interaction between them. Also sasuke's thoughts on him compared to itachi.

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And to think, there are people out there saying that fanfiction isn't literature. Your fic is the proof it can be.

Great idea you have here. Itachi's just hard to figure out, isn't he? I also like how you portrayed Sasuke. He was very much in the role of the 'little brother'.