Kittenn1011 2008-04-06 . chapter 11OMG THIS IS GREAT! Can't wait for an update! I LOVE IT!
update update! |
CrazyDreamerGirl 2008-01-22 . chapter 11Awesome chapters. I love the interaction between the two Shuichis and how everyone was avoiding the whole topic about how Kurama was different. Sorry for the lateness of my review. School has been pain. Anyway, I hope you update soon. Shiori going into the other dimension has definitely put a new twist in the story. |
LoveAnime18 2008-01-17 . chapter 11Interesting fanfic. I look forward to more. |
My blue rose 2008-01-15 . chapter 11oh my gosh! that was so funny, but would'nt shori going back cause some problems? *cough* Kurama *cough* I can't wait for the fight seen to end! I would have reveiwed last time but fn wouldn't let me... (they're out to get you) |
Tenshi-no-Aku 2008-01-15 . chapter 11Hmm... I've never imagined Shiori as having the ability to intimidate anyone before. It fits though.
Can't wait for the next update! ^.^ |
Tenshi-no-Aku 2008-01-14 . chapter 10Yay, you updated.
I tried to look up 'shard' in my english to japanese dictionary but it didn't have it so I looked up 'piece' and it had 'kakera (broken piece)'. I don't know if that helps but... I tried.
So update again soon!!
...please? |
CrazyDreamerGirl 2007-12-19 . chapter 9Yay! New chapter! This chapter was great. I can't wait until Shuichi and Kurama actually meet. That would be very interesting. Please update soon!^^ |
James Hiwatari 2007-12-18 . chapter 9Well...
Plot advances are not boring. Kuwabara and Hiei compensated for that.
Abou the teory, I think Keiko will be the one to realize her promise. I mean, even if there is no youkai in their world, it might have some "human" version of the twins and it is possible that Shuuichi will somehow change in that new wolrd and then, when they finally return, he will let his hair grow to remember the experience.
Anyway, I usually think of the most unrealistic scenario, if I'm talking nuts, it is normal, no need to be scared! XD
James Hiwatari |
The Anonymous Authoress 2007-12-17 . chapter 9Great chapter, I love the ending. Keep it up! |
James Hiwatari 2007-11-27 . chapter 8Indeed... it will become a very intersting time...
Wow, I loved it! I know it is anoying to say it, but please update soon! XD
I want to see Kuruma, the Shuuichis and Hiei meeting. It promises...
James Hiwatari |
CrazyDreamerGirl 2007-11-18 . chapter 8Yay! You updated! I like this chapter. I can't wait until the demons of the group will show up. Oh, will they ever ask how Yusuke is still alive? That would be an interesting conversation. I can't wait for the next chapter. |
Akari Neko-chan 2007-11-18 . chapter 8I can't wait for the next chapter! This is good! |
Vaxl 2007-10-20 . chapter 7:O
It's getting suspenseful...
Of course, this is coming fro ma mind that just woke up... That and I just got sick of teh half-sleep I was in and woke up... Moo, thanks for updating!
Heh, this story is literally an AU fic. :P |
Xariel1107 2007-10-19 . chapter 7Splee! (random comment) But i'm really liking this story!^^ Its getting really good! Update soon, please! *waits patiently* |
CrazyDreamerGirl 2007-10-19 . chapter 7I really want the two parties to meet. lol. Good chapter. I liked it. Please update soon. |