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| alias321 2007-06-19 ch 3,  | abuseNo constructive criticism or advice here - just wanted to say I can't wait for the next chapter! |
| JerseyJunk 2007-05-30 ch 3, | abuseah dang cliffhangers. :p lol great story so far, i love it. can't wait to read more. |
| incompetent.twitch 2007-05-30 ch 3, | abuseWow. you are truly talented as a writer. This does give us hope! I hope you review soon, because it's too good of a story line to abandon. Good job! |
| strome 2007-05-24 ch 3, | abusegreat story but you have to update it ASAP because it is really good. |
| Bubble Sheep 2007-05-24 ch 3, | abuseGreat chapter - I hope that Jack can get through to Audrey when he goes an sees her...and poor Audrey, getting the info on Jack in such a harsh way. New chapter soon? |
| 24andMummyfan 2007-05-24 ch 3, | abuseWow this is brilliant. Please update soon! |
| BrittanyLS 2007-05-23 ch 3, | abuseYour stories are alwasy incredible!! Please, please, please add more to this! The finale broke my heart and almost killed any good feelings I had about 24!! |
| AgentBauer 2007-05-23 ch 3, | abuseGreat. Please continue. AB |
| Shannonn14 2007-05-23 ch 3, | abuseupdate asap!! OMG i want to know what happens! |
| Bubble Sheep 2007-05-23 ch 2, | abuseWoo! Quick update!! Think its great how you've got Jack and Heller slowly building their relationship again. More soon? |
| Melcangel 2007-05-23 ch 2, | abuseHey, this is really good. I'm here in Australia, so they haven't aired the finale yet. Infact we're only up to the episode where he gets audrey back to CTU. But don't worry, If I was worried about spoilers, I wouldn't be reading this. Keep up the good work! |
| meli 2007-05-22 ch 2, anon. | abusei like this! its a good continuation from last night. the only thing is there's a couple parts that Jack might be OOC but other then that i love the storyline. |
| Jesus.Lives 2007-05-22 ch 2, | abuseAw, Jack! Where's your backbone?! :D I'm liking it though... and will be reading. |
| Jesus.Lives 2007-05-22 ch 1, | abuseHe went to calling him "sir" again pretty fast huh? ;) Lol. What happened to "you don't tell me what to do??!" But for Jack and Audury's sake, he'd better step down. :D |
| 24andMummyfan 2007-05-22 ch 1, | abusegreat story. your such a good writer cant wait to hear more ! |