I don't know if you'll be continuing this one or not (and I almost didn't want to read it, because I loved Before Sunrise and figured I'd love this one, but saw it hadn't been updated in a while), but I just wanted to tell you how great it is, even if you've heard it before. I absolutely love how you write the more mature version of Jess, and their interaction is lovely here. I always disliked how they ended up using the Jess-character and just the latter seasons (especially 6) in general, but I'm really enjoying this. I'd take your version over the real one any day.

So, here's hoping you'll continue this one day, but also thanking you for making me smile with both this and Before Sunrise :)

I love the entire premise of this story; I love how you had Rory break up with Logan, but still show enough compassion to see him in the hospital and call his dad. I hope with Rory and Jess together Lorelai and Luke's relationship will go better.

good chapter & more please & it's been 2 months so please hurry

good chapter

You're doing awesome, and I like how you're delaying the getting together of Rory and Jess, it was a smart move

This is very good! I think I've only seen, maybe, 2 eps after the whole 'I love Logan' fiasco in Philly so this is all very new to me - I can't wait to read more!!

I like how Jess and Rory are taking things slow, but I can't help and wonder if Jess would really be so CALM with the Logan stuff - he didn't hate him as much as Dean but it was made very clear that Jess did not like Logan on the show.

Either way though, this story is going great. Update soon!

Melissa

That must've felt good yelling at his father.

rory and jess i love them! this story is excellent! i love ya for the 2 chapters or is it 3 new chaps.! your the best!

I like that chapters are coming out fast! Keep it up.

The writing's great as always; it's nice to see Logan be a little more mature about the situation than Colin and Finn. Their comments seem uneccessarily hurtful toward Rory. Also, Jess being so understanding is a nice touch.

Nice. I'm looking forward to the Luke/Lorelai talk if you write it. I wish Jess would've stayed until Rory got back. And I really like the pace you're going at, it's very realistic. It's not just jumping in, it's taking time like I think they'd both do. Good work.

This was a great way to have your (better) storyline melt together with the show's (improving it). Really good update. I hope you'll keep them coming!

Lovin' that Rory actually has a backbone, here. Telling Lorelai that she's an idiot, not shacking back up with Logan... *bounces*

Keep 'em coming! *hugs*

i actually think your storyline fits more naturally than the season 6 storylines do! lorelai and christopher were so forced, this comes so much easier. great job as usual!

Great chapter, Update soon.

good job