I'm not even bothering to read further...you're just copying and pasting the previous story. Hardly creative.

What the hell does this mean? "She wanted to hill min then and there..." You spoil all the pleasure of what are really wonderful stories by being so careless and subliterate...

Aha! Here's the sequel I was hoping for! I am so glad Miles finally got a clue and went off with Mora! A fabulous ending to a very fabulous series! Thank you for sharing your talent of weaving such amazing stories with us!

Ravenna

My Lady Sunshine…I’ve finally reached the end of this installment, after much diligence and….procrastination. Now I can honestly say…it was amazing! I’m not sure what is says about me being hopelessly addicted to Jareth but I’m totally okay with that. As always, your story is wonderfully done. _

I’ve even done my duty of updating a story today so I think I’ve earned myself a treat. Therefore I’ll reward myself by reading more or your stories. (it’s a good system)

Incredible work! _

Sai

Awesome story like always. Have you started Crystal Truth? Can't wait for more stories. _

I do so love happy endings. I was able to skim this one pretty quick having just read trilogy. Enjoyed it:)

What a mess if they can just keep switching time around whenever the hell they feel like it!

Poor Jareth. But, I have no doubt that he'll be the victor in the end!

Yeah! Another installment! (Hope I'm not driving you crazy with my musings...)

This line: "I'm fixin' to be goblin on my Cookie." had me rolling with laughter. How long did it take you to come up with that little gem?

I love this tale, you've such a way with writing each story you come up with, their all fascinating and intriguing no matter what light they're written in. ::gives two thumbs up before dashing off to work:: Ja!

Crystal Truth? I'll have to see if its out there already... I, yet again, probably ended up overlooking it in your wonderful collection of stories... So many, and all of them excellent!

please write the other story..soon..i loved this one

good ch

great

loved it again

great cg