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| Giwu 2007-09-25 ch 1, | abuseYou really do a wonderful job of capturing these characters and providing the reader with a visual. Plus, we think alike-I added Bruno into Grissom's thoughts as well when he was thinking about the kidnapping! |
| Andsowego 2007-06-22 ch 1, | abuseNice story! Simple, short, sweet, and very believable. I hope you write more fics in the future! Andsowego |
| Peggiegg 2007-05-27 ch 1, | abuseThis is just a lovely view of a deep friendship. Thanks for sharing it! |
| Forensic Nurse 2007-05-22 ch 1, | abuseVery sad & sweet. I think you did a great job of characterization. I look forward to reading more from you! |
| ayesha-s 2007-05-22 ch 1, | abuseoh wonderful! sad yet sweet! |
| sara-sidle-csi-3 2007-05-22 ch 1, | abuseHey! Love the story! I personally would love to be ur Beta! Seriously! You have talant! So, email me at: liztresemer at yahoo dot com sorry it wont let me put it in email form! hope u can read it! Elizabeth :) |
| bando2 2007-05-22 ch 1, | abuseThis was good though i think you could have put that in more of a reaction from catherine. But good and sweet. |