Reviews for A God Walks Among Them

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Ebony Falcon 2008-04-03 ch 8,	abuseplease update! I wanna know what happens next so badly! ^_^ please?
tiarich 2008-03-02 ch 8,	abuseI just stumbled onto this amazing story and was wondering if you were going to post any more to this story. I really hope that you will as I really really would love to read more.
Dreamer's Lost Soul 2007-10-07 ch 5,	abuseI am so in love with the fic.. Adding lines to make some laughs makes a fic reader wanting to read more..
Dreamer's Lost Soul 2007-10-07 ch 4,	abuseO, this is getting juicy! I love it.. lol
Dreamer's Lost Soul 2007-10-07 ch 3,	abuseAww, that sweet Flackness at the end there was cute.. :P
Dreamer's Lost Soul 2007-10-07 ch 2,	abuseI still like this so far. ^^
Dreamer's Lost Soul 2007-10-07 ch 1,	abuseI really like this so far, and I couldn't stop laughing at Flack's reaction.. Was so funny.. I am so going to keep reading.. ~Sarah
marialisa 2007-09-10 ch 8,	abuseIts a difficult balance to achieve, getting enough information into a chapter to be realistic but not so much it becomes gratuitous - I think you got the balance spot on. I know I've told you this before but i love your take on Flack in this story. I love how, as much as he is affected by what he sees and wants to help the girls, he desperately wants to see whats in the note and understand why its addressed to him. You portrayed the emotions the team feel towards the perp in this crime realistically. On one hand he's killed people in a horrific way and their job is to catch him; on the other hand the people he has killed are responsible for acts that any decent person finds repugnant. Such a realistic emotion and one often overlooked in fiction and in the series itself. Great chapter, great writing.
Kuriei137 2007-09-09 ch 8,	abuseWow, this was a really moving chapter...especially knowing that these things don't just happen in fiction, that they're quite real. Still an interesting and realistic chapter, I'm looking forward to seeing what's in that letter.
notesofwimsey 2007-09-08 ch 8,	abuseI appreciate the information in the End Note, and would just note that for every child brought to North America and victimized here, there are probably 20 to 100 more in their own countries, sold by their own parents, to be used in brothels by North American and European tourists on organized child-sex tours. It is a universal problem and I applaud your effort to publicize the work being done to stop it. That being said, I think you also dealt with the topic well in terms of the actual story. Flack's core decency shines through here as he struggles to deal with too many things which challenge his belief in what is right. I love that no matter how difficult his job, he is still capable of hurting for a damaged child or distressed woman. I look forward to the next installment of this difficult but fascinating piece.
SallyJetson 2007-09-08 ch 8,	abusequote - "As sick as this bastard is, he really is an angel to those girls." And really what else can you say? As sick as the serial killer is he sicker than men who get off on raping/torturing young girls who are forced into sexual slavery. You have dealt with a harrowing topic in a very straightforward and sensitive manner. Kudos! As for the story itself. I am anxious to find out what the serial killer could possibly have to say to Flack. Does he hope to have something in commong with Flack, hope that Flack might admire him a bit for what he did to the sick bastards? You have aptly painted a picture of a very sick individual.
Ebony Falcon 2007-08-08 ch 7,	abusePlease oh please update this and soon! I really wanna know what happens next. Why is the letter addressed to Don. What's it say? please update!
marialisa 2007-08-06 ch 7,	abuseSorry to take so long to review. Loved the background to Hawkes and the scene between him and Sid and Peyton was excellent; great banter as well as giving us more information about the case. Love how you portray the realtionship between Danny and Flack but OMG, the bodies...made me feel quesy. I suspect that had this been on a screen I would have been watching through my fingers (I know, childish, but I hate the gore!) Can't wait to find out what was written in the note. And who is it that's alive? Looking forward to the next update.
Spontaneity 2007-07-30 ch 7,	abuseHOLY CRAP!! I want to read more about this!! Or do I... NO! I do! Please, more...
SallyJetson 2007-07-25 ch 7,	abuseThe rundown of Hawkes' life and his motivations... fantastic. quote-the disappointment on their faces at seeing him instead of the vic was clear. "What?" Hawkes smiled, "Just because I'm alive, you don't care?" HAHA! Dedicated scientists are always entertaining to poke fun at... but ME's particularly so. Sid and his quirky musings cracked me up. Peyton's resignation to working with someone such as Sid was exactly as how I think she would handle it. I love the interaction between Flack and Danny: Danny's 'daddy issues' with Mac and Flacks' recognition of Danny's PTSD at returning to a warehouse as reflected in Flack's own experinces but... the case, just chilling and now I think we are getting down to the nitty, gritty with that pristine white envelope with Flack's name inscribed upon it. Can hardly wait until the next chapter. Excellent.

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