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Casey Foley
2008-07-17
ch 10, anon.
abuseI love the story so please continue
the Davy Jones thing was great
I would like to see someone fall in love with each other, PLz?
BUT if does not go with the story skip it.

Casey
Wandering Hitokiri
2008-06-18
ch 2,
abuseThis looks very good so far, and I love the individual girl's reactions.
Medusa Sparrow-Descouedres
2008-03-20
ch 10,
abuseBeing chased by The Dutchman? Ooh, scary. Dunno who's scarier, Davy Jones or Barbossa.

Anyways, great chapter, update soon.

Medusa.
SpiritoftheBlackRose
2008-03-09
ch 10,
abusethis is gettin' good!!

you have to keep going!

sayings in the ninth chapter were hilarious...
Nicole
2008-03-08
ch 10, anon.
abuseYAY! I'm actually in these chapters! WO! Its so awsome MARCELLA! A-W-S-O-M-E!
I cnat wait to read more!
TavyBeckettFan
2008-03-08
ch 10,
abuseWhen's Cuttlefish coming? Soon I hope? *meloveshim*

This was a great chapter. (and the last one too!)

UPDATESOON!!

jb
cinekimi
2008-03-08
ch 10, anon.
abuseI am seriously LOVING this story, you're an awesome writer! By the way, is a loonie like a dollar to us? But yeah, keep it up! You're actually managing to keep everyone in character unlike pretty much everyone else on this website.
cinekimi
2008-03-08
ch 9, anon.
abuseBlack-eyed Peas! Good choice, Jack!
Wolf Mystic
2008-03-08
ch 10,
abuseWhoa, ma-a-an. The freakin' Dutchman! Is our favorite fish-face pirate there?
lodt
2008-03-08
ch 1, anon.
abuseCheck out Lords of Dogtown ff! RIP Heath Ledger!
CrypticCalico
2008-03-06
ch 8,
abuseOh, dear. That's not very good, is it? Love this story. All of the pirates are very in-character, and your OC's are wonderful as well. Good mix of humour(you had me laughing my butt off) and suspense. Hope you update soon! :D
cazonetta
2008-02-19
ch 8,
abuseLOL!

This is good... oh, so so good... especially the "moving stairs" part, lol... your writing is so convincing, one can just see it all happening.

XD
hotbritt5000
2008-02-04
ch 8,
abuseGreat Story You should continue =]
BroKeN WiNGsS
2008-02-02
ch 8,
abuseLmao this is so great. I hope you update this soon because I love it!
Nikki!!the REAL Nicole
2008-01-31
ch 8, anon.
abuseOMG! I LOVE IT MARCELLA! i got back form soccer and HAD to read! YAY! you put in my somewhat athletic ability!! hehehehe. I"M ALIVE! AND I LOVE YOUR STORY MARCELLA!!
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