I really like this so far.


Pet Peeve: Shone, not shined shined is not a word.

The floors had been swept clean, mopped down, and polished until they *shined* bright as diamonds.

The floors had been swept clean, mopped down, and polished until they *shone* as bright as diamonds.

I found your story just a few days ago and I like it. It even gets better with every new chap, so go on! ( note: those nice words is "AI SHITERU", I´m sure of that)

I just finished reading this sotry and simply I like it very much. There are no many about my two favorites so I´m also very gratefull, but I don´t understand why didn´t you completed it yet? Please, try.

Really good story but aren't you gonna complete it? I'm waiting for the ending..

Wow.
Kurama must be very astonished and angry. Poor Yomi, he's all alone. (again) Many would have acted like Kurama though if they laid eyes on the mark

aww...poor yomi =(

Aw, I'm feeling bad for Yomi right now. I haven't watched the three kings arc, so I only know a bit, but I really like this story. I know the situation with Kurama and Yomi and all that jazz, but, but it's nice to read something like this. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work!

DMK

Wow...this is a good fic. But this ending's depressing! I kind of want to cry, actually. Ok, I'll admit it, I really want to cry. Please update soon, it's too sad of a place to leave for long.

Really cool chapter, I like the ways Yomi could "see." I'm very impressed, and I look forward to reading much more.

I hope that you write more. I would really like to see what is next. Keep up the good work!

DMK

What happened to being kind? I'll never understand Yomi. I love the story and the fact that I keep getting stares from some person is saying that I really need to stop reading at the library. I think I'll read more of your work

this so great!

yomi is his mate ? but what is kurama to yomi?

so that mean yomi is now his mate??
love the story i8s great!!1

Nihao!
I liked it. Its cool to see a yomi and kurama story(s). (hee... I have read you other story also. I like them both!) I dont have much more to say so...

Doigen,Kojima Komori

Thanks for the update, wonder what Kurama's going to think about that mark...hum...update soon please and thank you :)