This was pretty insightful. Nice. :)

great story! XD

I liked the use of second person and the consistency of the imagery; Hunny's surprisingly important role was also spot-on (he really tends to be the one with the most sense on the various club members, especially in the manga). I loved the first line. I loved the quiet intimacy of the last scene, however brief. And I absolutely adored the quote. Wonderful job. ^^

Wow. I put you on author alert and I got alerts about your Ouran stories and I had no idea what to do with them since I didn't know what that was. But now that I know the plot of it, I can read your stories!

Anyways, good job.

Nice and short.

The way you put the quote at the end helped.

Oh, very good and very thought-provoking. I always enjoy reading your fics. Thanks for this one! And more power to you~

That's pretty cool. It's a good story, no need ofr words, just discriptions and actions. I like it.
.:Nikos:.

Wow, that was an amazing read. I especially loved the second person perspective here; it gives a different sense of view, and makes it all the more interesting. :]