"Forgive me, milady," he said, not even trying to sound apologetic. "I misspoke. What I meant to say is that you're so powerful that I no longer have to stare at you to be under your control. There is no escape from you. I am forever your slave."

Beautiful line!

Interesting that you have Padme be the one more eager for their physical relationship to begin. Most stories play it the opposite way.

Very sweet.

VFA

A very nice story. I don't think that the characterizations are cannon, but they are very nice. The galaxy far far away might be better if it was.

VFA

I loved it!! Anakin and Padme are so perfect together, and even though they are the two most stubborn people ever, they care about each other so much that it all works out perfectly. I love this story - it's one of the best Anakin and Padme marriage stories I've ever read! I really liked your inclusion of the servants too, they were very entertaining, lol ;)

Nice work!

LOVED IT...

wow that was LONG! I mean, I love verbosity, but you could have made that a LITTLE more concise. a lot of the plot was really circuious. loved the fluff, though.

this was by far your best story yet. i was captafated till the very end. It also make me glad to have read your first three books to know that all will be right for the two of them

excellent story! i loved it!

You never fail to impress me. Love this story! Lucas missed so much drama/romance in the sage that should have been included. Thanks for giving us your point of view & ideas on how it could have happened.

great chapter

I'm really glad this is finally finished! I love your writing and I can't wait to read the third part of your trilogy!

This was very sensual and I truly enjoyed this chapter. Yes it does fill in that gap, left open in the movie.

Great job indeed Julie, it's very evident a great deal of care was involved in developing and producing this story.

Gorgeous. Very well done. :)

Another great job well done! A wonderful ending for a fantastic story. You really did a good job with this chapter, as you did with the last one. Such sweet moments of joviality and love between them. I really enjoyed it.

As ATOC is my one of my favorites in the saga , I felt compelled to read and review this.
It was a very enjoyable read and a strong solid start to the story.
You captured the essence of their love for each other. I love your portrayal of Padme.
You did a nice job with this aspect of their story.
I look forward to reading more.

=)