Glad to see another chapter. Just one little thing, there didn't seem to be anybreaks between the differing pov's and that was kind of confusing.

This fic strikes me as a mite crackish. It's brilliant, actually. ^_^

well, this kept me laughing for a good long while. the story is a bit confusing with ellory as the narrator, but i´m assuming you´ll clear up a lot of it as the story progresses- like the whole percy, zach, theo thing. that´s still a little confusing. and who is aunt dor? oc or a character i forgot about.
love pluto´s personality and ellory´s narration. and caleb´s a nice dose of reality. very good so far.

Happy to see another chapter!

Ellory reminds me of someone, who could it be...*grin*

It's good. I hope to see more.

Well done, I like your new characters. I look forward to reading more.

d00d. You're frigging good at the sort of stream-of-consciousness writing style. *is jealous* Also,