nicely done

awesome story hope you update soon

Aw, great story. I'd wish you continue :l

that was a hot story and this couple is very cool

This was really good! You should consider continuing with this. Grimmjow and Rangiku is an interesting rivalry.

Good GOD I loved this. You do *excellent* fight scenes, and that is really very rare. Even more rare, you managed to capture the feeling of a pitched battle. At least, what I imagine to be a pitched battle; it's not like I've been in one.

This is a completely unique little scene that doesn't bother with pairings or repeated well-tread jokes. You do a magnificent job with Matsumoto, making her a serious fighter, a responsible leader and yet still keeping her completely in character. Same with Grimmjaw.

So, in short.. more!

ack! don't make this into a one-shot. involve the other members of the 10th division (or to be blatantly obvious, hitsugaya! lol). anyway, for what it's worth, i enjoyed this. it's a cliff-hanger, but i enjoyed it nonetheless. now kindly make it longer and lemme see hitsugaya-taicho in the fray. ;-b