 Chatwyn 2009-11-07 . chapter 9Woah, I love your story! I laughed when I realised who they gave those rum apples to and the way you treat the 100 Acre Woods toys is nothing short of cruel (but really funny). I like seeing how frazzled Xenmas is, and I can't believe that Saix hit Xenmas either (but I'm also a little impressed at the same time). I think it was kind of good for Saix, because he was talking about how he was jealous that the others still remembered his old life, but he didn't. Do you think he'll run into any of his old friends? Saix seems to be adapting well - it might be something of a battle for Xenmas to get him to COME BACK to Org 13, or maybe not. You promise a confrontation next chapter, and THAT I'm really looking forward to.
btw; why are Marluxia and Larxene being brought back, but not Zexion? Is he not dead? |
 Rufio the Sheep 2009-11-05 . chapter 9is it wrong of me to totally want Xemnas to go all cheated and burned wife on Saix's ass...and you've made me interested in Garmjaw/Saix far too much.
i pray and plead for more updates <3 |
 Xendell 2009-11-01 . chapter 9DUN-DUN-DUUN, indeed! This update made me incredibly happy. I will wait patiently until you update again, but gosh, you do fantastic work. This story is amazing! |
 wryter4-hire 2009-10-31 . chapter 9holy crap in a half..this has to be the best story I've read in a long long time. I hope you update soon! Please update soon! |
 gothboymylove 2009-10-27 . chapter 9duhn duhn duhn the plot thickens! Thanks for updating, I can't wait for the next chapter (the cliffhangers will be the death of me some day XD)
p.s It's wonderful having a new Kingdom Hearts game to play, especially one with the org. members! :D |
 lash 2009-10-26 . chapter 9 i think i never saw something funny as this fic. GOD. You just made my day. FUNNY AS. I laughed hardcore. keep up with your good work. |
 Incompetence 2009-10-25 . chapter 9Oh, man. I laughed my ass off the whole time I read this. It started getting serious though, but I like it. Which is rare for me. Keep it up, man. |
 YumeSangai 2009-10-24 . chapter 1Oh my god, i really Laugh Out Loud.
"Do you know what Xemnas would do to us if he found out? We’d be banished to the 100 Acre Woods for a month" LMAO!!
This is perfect! |
 Namipulla 2009-10-24 . chapter 9You said it yourself. "Never a dull moment, is there?" I found this fic last night after coming over my block to look only for M-rated stories, and had to read it all without a break. I just finished and decided to leave a review. Someone else already commented what was on my mind so now I feel like repeating but... yes, there aren't enough Xemnas x Saix fics that actually go deep, survey the characters' personalities and give the relationship time to evolve. And the world deserves more! Xemnas and Saix deserve more! What I really love in this fic is that you've managed to make it comedy and drama in the same time. While Xemnas' and Saix's worlds are serious and brooding, the aspect of the rest of the Organisation (referred from now on as the Clown lot) lightens the story up enormously. And these sides still stay in balance. Through the whole story there are some figures of speech which make me stop and smile stupidly to myself (and I'm not even a native English speaker). Awesome and very entertaining.
I'm still a bit shocked from the reveal of Axel's true name. Although I came around a rather peculiar (=crazy) theory. Maybe his somebody was a woman! :D And since they were in good terms with Saix, maybe he was a _she_ as well (Isa, daa-a). Saix is pictured to be a bit vain, isn't he? Not in this story but in KH2. All that tossing of his hair and diamond earrings. Alright, maybe your theory of Saix formerly being a werewolf was a bit better... That was OT. I just wanted to tell you that you gained a new eager reader. I wish you a great inspiration with this story and hope to see you update soon again. |
 Pineapple 2009-10-21 . chapter 9 I'm writing a review, since you so nicely asked. Honestly, you rock. There isn't enough realistic XemSai out there, and you have a werewolf!Saix innit. Priceless!
I'm waiting for the confrontation, so I hope you'll write it down soon. (Yes, I'm shamelessly begging for an update)
The bringing Mar and Larx back was a complete twist for me - I was so caught up with Garmjaw (I'm adoring this little OC of yours, so don't harm him, please) that I didn't even think what was up with the plot with Hades. Odd.
Anyway, since I haven't taken the time to review before, I think I should also comment on Garmjaw. At first I was a bit 'bah' about him, being an OC and all. Now, when I have read more of him, I've come to adore him. However, I hope you know what you will do to him (hopefully he won't die painfully in Saix's arms, who shall vow to revenge him, that would just be so wrong. In many levels.)
Sorry for this epic lenght!review. I think next time I'll review more often so I won't need to cram everything up to write just one... (And sorry for my english too, not my native language) |
 irishpotaoes 2009-10-20 . chapter 9 please don't kill Garmjaw <:) |
 Inspector Dyme 2009-10-20 . chapter 9Yay! Awesome chapter as usual! It's so exciting to think that in the next chapter so much shit is going down! I really liked the friendship that's starting to happen between Saix and Garmjaw. And the fact that Xemnas will be joining Xaldin. Poor guy has to deal with the Superior's insanity!
And bringing back Marluxia and Larxene is probably the greatest evil plan that Xigbar has come up with yet! Can't wait until the next update!! |
 Jhyena Aj Jax 2009-10-19 . chapter 1 dang poor Roxas and those names for the rooms hahah but isnt Zexion the master of manpulation? |
 Hee Ho Kun 2009-10-19 . chapter 9Ill update. I'm really enjoying the Garmjaw and Saix relationship btw. Perhaps you should consider writing a oneshot of them? It would be so AWESOME!1! ahem, well...
Keep up the great work <3 |
 Gemelli 2009-10-19 . chapter 9 Ohh I wonder what happens next. Xemnas and Saïx running into each other again...Marly and Larxene back...things will get exciting. Also, love how you've written Hades. <3 Either way, looking forward to the next chapter. ^^ Keep up the good work. :) |