Ah if only you can interpret what could have been written in the whole book that Sawa wrote. I'm sure it was good.

Nice fic and interesting story. This was one of my fav chapters.

Well written and sweet Haru Wo Daite Ita is such a wonderful manga. I just wish there were more fanfics for it.

Anywheeze... As I am a nitpick, I felt the need to state this: Nagisa-sama's novel is called Flesh Flute, not Fresh Flute.

So... Yeah. I loved it, though In character and overall well done. XD Keep up the good work!

aww this story was so sweet

i havent read the manga (though i desperatly want to) but i have watched the anime, and i remember that scene XD

i thought katou's possesiveness was so perfect, and the way iwaki was so flustered was adorable.

i laughed when katou grabbed iwaki away from that man. it was so cute

Aw... This is so sweet and loving. I love it. It's beautiful!

For my first foray into the Haru Wo Daiteita fandom, I am really pleased that this was my first read. Essentially, this piece captures the characters and the entire them of manga quite well; it is passionate and has just the right amount of fluff in it. Aside from that, I really like the idea of using "Fresh Flute" as a means to explore their relationship; it makes me ponder over how perceptive Nagisa truly is. Futhermore, you write very well, and I didn't catch any glaring errors (maybe there were some instances with wording or syntax, but they are hardly worth mentioning). Honestly, I encourage you to write more.