So cute. I love it. _

*heart eyes* Ye :) thats lovely! *huggle Hal n Snake* They so cute mwahaha *ahem* very nicely done!

I love your story. :) Cute and sweet. Great job!

Oooooohziez! Cuteness! (don't kill me peeps, I'm a yaoi-fan. LOL! Go SnakexOtacon!) LOL. Not really. OtaconxWolf, and SnakexMeryls rock too, but SnakexOtacon... hm. Interesting pairing, LOL. Don't see that everyday, LOL.

*twiddles foot in the dirt* Would you mind if i archived it at my YahooGroup?

http:/groups.yahoo.com/group/MetalGearSlash/

Shy Kat

*stars in eyes*

That was great! I've been looking all over for Hal/Dave(Otacon/Snake) yaoi and slash...It's really hard to find. Yours was really well written. Very in-character! Write more, please!

*Melts into a goopy puddle of... goop* Weeeee... My heart flys on golden wings of looove! *babbles nonsencical prose* _ Otacon is the best, he's my favorite. You did that GREAT. I'm not so sure that Otacon's got a thing for Snake, but if I did I'd admite it... (just to let you know I don't have a problem with it.)

You write Otacon very well. He's so Kawaii... I love him. I will marry him. Weeee!

One of Otacons quotables and actions

Snake...What was She fighting for? What am i fighting for? what are you fighting for?

*snake* If we make it through this, ill tell you!

In the Ninja battle

*crawls backward away from ninja* *pees in pants*

LOL

Yha Otacon AND shonen-ai... my life has taken a turn for the better!

Very well written. You captured Otacon's personality and told things from his POV terrifically. What the heck is 'shounen ai?' Hehe.

Wow, never seen an MGS fic on Otacon. He's cool and all, but for some reason no one wants to write about him. I'm going to include him in my next fic. Anyway, great story, I liked it. Write more!