continue or ill kill you!11

Sugoi Sugoi! I Loved it! I Love the partner switch idea, It sounds like something Hotaru would do. ^_^ You portrayed Natsume and Mikan very well. Especially their different views about the "kiss" Excellent story!

Lovely! I saw your picture in deviantart~ And wow, what a lovely surprise ^^ Nice story~

AW!
yay! my fav pairings!

Wow, nice story~~ love it!

Great story, hk!

--sarah

NICE! XD

THIS IS SO BRILLIANT!! I love this so much. I would love if the manga were to have this in it, its soo excellent. ^_^
The part when Natsume kissed her makes my heart skip a beat...Great job!

it's a weird hotaru in my imagination... but it's great! oh yeah,.. do you know where to read the volume 5 of gakuen aline? (online)

hi again!

^^ need i say it again?
i admire your work!!

nice fic

wah!why stop there!O well, though we know what happened with Mikan and Natsume. ^^Nice fic anyway

cute
cute
seriously really cute

the story is so kawaii! hehehe...

wow. that was really nice. :D good job! :D