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| Azure Inu 2008-07-22 ch 7,  | abuseI'm sitting here at ten thirty at night, I just finished reading all seven chapters of this story, and I am too overwhelmed to think of anything to say. This story is fascinating, the characters are deep and compelling, and a swarm of angry Scyther could not keep me from reading the next chapter, and all the others to follow. I will be waiting, with thinly disguised impatience. |
| metasamus 2008-06-11 ch 7, | abuseI know this is my fourth review in such short time but I think in the next chapter you should have the taillow morph included.P.S. could you let us know if any years go by in between chapters? |
| metasamus 2008-06-11 ch 1, | abuseHey Dragonfree, I really hope you update this story soon I really like this story a lot. Thank you for listening. |
| metasamus 2008-06-11 ch 7, anon. | abuseMy friend zantok would probably like the idea of this story. |
| metasamus 2008-06-10 ch 7, anon. | abuseIt was no suprise to me that jean got in the movie, seriously it wasn't.Still a good chapter. |
| metasamus 2008-06-10 ch 7, anon. | abuseYou've got to be kidding me,I know she's a scyther morph but that was just (throws up) pretty much that. other than that it was a pretty good chapter. |
| Juptile 2008-05-19 ch 7, | abuseI KNEW this would eventually happen. Something this controversial would result in violence eventually. And, as usual, Mia rocks ^_^. A bit of a shock for Gabriel, though. |
| Xoroth 2008-05-15 ch 7, | abuseBig drama, great chapter. |
| iLike2EatPiez 2008-05-14 ch 7, | abuseI'm just loving this story. Great realistic approach to the whole "Pokemorphs" theme. The character developement is excellent too! “They took us to the morgue,” she went on. “Brian was there. There was a lot of blood. It smelled nice. I think I wanted to eat him.” ^This made me burst out laughing. Exactly the kind of quote that makes Mia my favorite character. Lol. |
| Foxyjosh 2008-05-14 ch 7, | abuseI can't tell you how much I hate those religious nuts. I'm glad to see Dave is alright. |
| swack16 2008-05-14 ch 7, | abuseYay you finally updated! |
| Eliabeth 2008-05-13 ch 7, anon. | abuseWow. I didn't exspct tht to happean, exspeslly to Brian of all people. Nice turn to the story. I hope you update soon and if you ever include another morph, I thimk it should be an eevee morph. |
| enderverse 2008-05-13 ch 7, | abusepretty weird story well written but freaky. |
| leslie 2008-05-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseI think if you made pokemorphs one should be an eevee morph. |
| Cedric Bale 2008-05-05 ch 6, anon. | abuseNice, an update. I'm starting to wonder if this is taking place in a (fictional) real-world instead of the Pokemon world like I'd been assuming thus far, lol. Nothing pokemon related except the kids themselves. Could imagine some seriously controversial issues being brought up if one of the kids expresses interest in becoming a Pokemon Trainer, rofl. On another note, I'm liking this 'Ben' character already. Can't wait to see more of him. |