DUM DUM DUM! Hostage situations...really can't say I saw that coming...but I'm glad this is being updated and also glad that it's going somewhere...I hope. XP Update soon!

...wow. I must say, I love reading the characters; they all have such different thought processes, it amuses me greatly. Mia is my favorite by far, though...I couldn't tell you why, exactly, but she is~
I'm definatly looking forward to what happens to Gabriel! His angst-ridden self is growing on me~

I've been thinking for a bit after I finished all 11 chapters in one sitting, and concluded that you've just found yourself a human male version of Mia. Minus the blades, and the meat presents.

Great story, it's a wonderful read, and hope that you can keep this stuff up.

To the others who reviewed and told Dragonfree to hurry: Writing takes time, it can't be sped up, nor slowed down. It just happens, so stop trying to hurry something that could go downhill just as easily as it could get better. (I am anticipating the next chapter as much as you guys, but please have some patience.)

Wow...thats all i can say. I am aloss for adeiquate words to describe my feelings.(adds to favorites)

Odd, usually I review what I read...

My only major criticism I have with the fic is the number of characters, or perhaps the effectiveness of them being introduced. In total there were about 11, right? (It changes perspective so often, the fact the morphs change houses don't help either)

Minor things could just be word choice. Adjectives don't always make a sentence more effective, at least not in story writing. (Adjectives tend to support passive, rather than active writing)

The pokemorph genre is an odd one. There aren't too many decent fics. I'll give you points for originality. Religious nutcases are the type of character you just love to hate.

As a note try to make their actions more of a reason to hate them, instead of allowing yourself to slam them from a narrator's perspective. If you want to slam them as a narrator, try writing in first person.

Again, usually I review what I read. When I first found , this was one of the first fics I read. Sorry for the ignorance.

omg, a pokemorphnapping (or whatever you wanna call it), this should e interesting

That's terrible! But boy did I call it! Well, sort of.

Great chapter!

Great cliffhanger.

Wow. I wasn't expecting a story of this calibre. Great work.

good story so far, please continue it if you can!

Zomg, update!? Is Gabriel working up to an evolution? O_o I doubt it, but I can't think of anything else to explain the way he feels. Now that I think about it, I could totally see the group of morphs splitting up and fighting for/against humanity, against eachother in some sort of super-hero slash super-villain set up, with this being like, their origin stories showing how a bunch of them from opposing sides were good friends before they grew up / evolved / whatever they do. And now that I think about THAT (aka re-read that), that whole idea seems really random and out'a nowhere. And corny. D: Anyways, wherever you -actually- take this, I'm looking forward to reading it. Hopefully it'll make more progress before I'm an old man. ;)

Those religious nuts are like flies. When one gets caught, two more take its place. I think that guy let himself get caught so the scientists would come out of hiding. Terrible but, that's the way it is.

Great chapter by the way!

wow, they're learning to use attacks now, sweet! keep going dragonfree!

I really like it but it doesn't seem very funny.

Interesting concept, though it certainly reminds me of why I don't like people very much... anyway, please continue, as I am very eager to see what happens next.