Lame.

Some formatting/punctuation issues make it hard to read, like the bold and some un-needed capitalisation. I couldn't help laughing though at the line about the four-eyed man :)

So just work on the formatting and grammar 'cause there's some good humour in there :)

Poorly written, hella funny, not complete. MORE CHAPTERS! Anded too abruptly. But anyways, yeah. Really funny. =)

-Audrey

Nice work, interesting spin due to a non-futurama character being the main player in this one.

Had the futurama humour too so well done.

For a first fanfic, it wasn't that shabby. It was good and liked the story (poor Gordy :P), but I do have a couple of pointers.

*You don't have to do it mostly in bold
*Need to add capitals/periods/etc. if you forget.

I hope these help. :) Can't wait for more Futurama stories!