Please add a part 3!!For all the pearlshipping fans?

I think the ending was adorable ;) Nice job.

You so didn't screw the ending it was cute.I can't believe I am still crying about ,but it was so sweet.

It was a good ending! People don't have to do french kissing to make it romance! It was good.

Good. It's defiantly not cheesy and Dawn sounds like Dawn.

Yo.

To tell you the truth, it didn't seem OOC to me.

Your story was great.

Make a sequel. (that would be awesome)

Hey, nice job! A little short, but still pretty good.

Aww, that was really cute~ It didn't seem OOC to me at all. You should totally make a sequel :D

This was a cute story. Very well written, in my opinion. I'm more of an Advanceshipper, but Pearlshipping is kind of starting to appeal to me. Well anyway, Ash wasn't all that OOC at the end, and I didn't find any parts confusing. Anyway, good job with the story. Kudos.

I 4got bout pikachu in one of my stories!XD
I liked it,
a bit short,
but perty good!
Ending was nice and sweet.
Sumtimes tats bettah tan a big lovey-dovey ending.
Awsm!
see ya later!;)
~Nicole

This story was GREAT! keep it up!

Aww~

I think this came out very well actually! We make a good fanfic writing team don't we? :D

Lulz I saw that in a review someone who was wondering who won second place in the Grand Festival - CARLTON DID AMIRITE? ;3

Satoshi is so oblivious to romance that sometimes you have to give him a little push. xD
I personally loved the ending; not a fluffy confession-type thing, which would have been too OOC for Satoshi anyways. Instead it was subtle Pearlshipping cuteness. Very sweet~

Nice, really nice fic. Wright more

I thought it was very cute. Its hard to make any kind of romance work without making Ash ooc. I think you did well. :)

Aside from forgetting Pikachu this has been a great story. It just needs some fine tuning thats all. That and well the Pearlshipping is still new so that had to make it a little touher.