Wow. I just stumbled on this poem as I was looking for another story and all I can say is that I loved it.

luv it. he didn't remember that he is technically dead apparently though.

some of the rhyming is kinda weak but over all very nice concept! I like it

wow thatwas freakin awsome!u r like my favorite author on here.i loved bloody i can't wait to read the rest of crimson hearts.

aw love it

very good!

aww

this is cute.. && sad (

but good *thumbs up*