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airnaruto45
2008-10-07
ch 47,
abuseIt's a broadway show that tells of the new york yankees baseball team during the 30s where they had horrible records every year I think. any way that was a very nice chapter
airnaruto45
2008-09-25
ch 46,
abusehow about We've got Heart from Damn Yankees as the next song
Katsumara
2008-09-15
ch 45,
abuseAh, this was a pretty awesome chapter. Good writing. Sorry for the super late review. D:
nutshak
2008-09-15
ch 45,
abuseHurrah! for a story that didn't have kataang in it it was pretty freekin awesome. Liked zuko's train of thought.

Keep it up!
Ocaj
2008-09-14
ch 45,
abuseThe three needs of man. I don't think that works out well. Female company doesn't always involve love, and love is a basic need for everyone.

I like the story, but Iroh trying to get Zuko to a brothel? That strikes me as...odd to say the least. Do you have some cultural aspect in mind?
airnaruto45
2008-09-14
ch 45,
abuseokay but you will do Pink elephants on parade from Dumbo involving the time in season 2 when Sokka got drunk right?
crystal.elements
2008-09-05
ch 41,
abuseOkay. I simply had to comment on this chapter, because to me, this one shined the most out of all the rest.

I attempted to do a oneshot detailing the Kataang side of things during Boiling Rock and failed miserably. That could be some of the reason to why I enjoyed this so much...but even without that little side note, there was just something about this chapter that made it perfect. Both Aang and Katara seemed to be characterized very well, and it just...flowed incredibly smoothly. You found the perfect Broadway song for this. Or perhaps it was the other way around - you found the perfect Kataang idea for this song. (I've personally never heard the song itself before, but now I'm itching to find it on youtube or something.)

Anyway. It's safe to say that this was wonderful. So wonderful, in fact, that I'm putting the whole thing in my Favorites, something that should've been done a long time ago. Amazing job, and keep it up! ;)
ilovekataang
2008-09-03
ch 44,
abuseno offense, but i REALLY do not like it when ppl blame Katara for things she had to do. katara knew aang had to face the fire lord alone, and thats why she went with zuko. i also think zuko KNEW that Katara loved Aang, and thats why he protected her from Azula's lightning. by the way, can u make the next chapter really fluffy? ok, not trying to be mean or anything, bye!
nutshak
2008-09-03
ch 44,
abuseNaww poor katara. Great writing, though.

Keep it up!
lorelessbison
2008-09-02
ch 44,
abuseI agree that the finale lacked sensical reason why Katara wasn't much more concerned about Aang than she should have been. Well, the Zutarians would argue it was because she had unbridled lust for Zuko which will surface in about two or more years after the finale and then write a story about it. Yeah, I'm not completely convinced either.

I understand your frustration with Katara on the whole manner, but it's really the writers' fault for botching her character slightly at the very end. So try not to be too harsh on her.

As for the story itself, it's a really nice piece written in the company of an old song even I know, so good job. I have not read your story: Flying Embers, yet, but I'll read it once you post the next chapter so I won't feel like I've waited.
lyrical-harmonies
2008-09-02
ch 11,
abusei like it, though i never considered maiko for this song before. and who doesn't like mai? she's the only reason zuko's bearable...

suggestions (if you want them:)
wishing you were somehow here again/phantom of the opera
blood in the water/legally blonde (probably not a romance)
slipping through my fingers/mamma mia
i'm not afraid of anything/songs for a new world
how long must this go on/beauty and the beast (though you probably know that)


i could come up with more if i had the attention span, but anyways, i think you could use these songs well
Argorok34
2008-09-02
ch 44,
abuseWell as usual this is great, I really don't know how you do it. I love to read about katara and her regrets and she really should have many of them.

I will add this and that's your AN's really make me hate the finale more then I already do. Gah, I don't know how they dropped the ball with the last 8 episodes. (really most of the third season, whatever)

Well I'm just glad you and others continue to make great fanfics so I can get what I couldn't from the show.
airnaruto45
2008-09-02
ch 44,
abuseoh come on it reflected the Agni kai pretty well in my mind so use the song for that
nutshak
2008-08-21
ch 43,
abuseLoved the way you executed everyones pov, worked out great! loved it.

Keep it up!
Wishing Only Wounds The Hea...
2008-08-20
ch 43,
abuseI actually liked the irony, and the lyrics were quite humorous. Another musical I now need to add to my list ...



Personally, I feel that Azula isn't straight, and that Ty Lee will love anything that moves.
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