 Wint 2007-05-30 . chapter 1That's so sweet! But, Riku does seem like the type to be the one people confide in, and he being the one that's expected to help you. But sometimes, that task doesn't seem to give you what you want, which is sad... Hopefully he'll find his girl one day. |
 Artxet 2007-05-30 . chapter 1It reminds me of that Evanescence song: Your Star. "I'll live to make you shine." Aww, stuff of pure genius right there. ;_; Good work. |
 JazzBox 2007-05-27 . chapter 1Aww..so sad.
Poor Riku. But either way, I never really supported him with any of the KH girls, so that's okay at least. XD
Great story once again! |
 Kupo3.0 2007-05-25 . chapter 1aww so cute, i LOVE it
very beautiful and sad, i like both namiku and namixas so i felt torn, i like the fact you went with the more brooding, tender side of riku in this fic versus making him egotistical like in Ice Cream and many other fics that generalize him and put him in a category
breathtaking
"I live to make you shine" |
 warm.summer.nights 2007-05-24 . chapter 1gaspers.
That was so sad! Such beautiful phrasing, and Riku's love was so strong! Urgh! Why couldn't Naminé SEE that?
lol.
that's what makes the fic though...
You had so many great lines... 'i live to make you shine'? Precious.
And Riku. I just wanted to huggle him. So badly.
Excellent fic, dear. |
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