lolz! Johnny rocks for cussing in spanish! Btw, puta means bitch, not whore, oh and if you're going to use spanish cussing again in later chapters bendeho=asshole...

Just thought you might like to know! >:)

I've already reviewed the later chapters...so I'll talk to you from this chapter.

I LOVE THIS STORY! ...but you haven't updated in 3.5 months. This is really close to being on my favorites...if it isn't already... IF YOU UPDATED...I SWEAR to put it on...you can sue me if I don't! I just need more of this sotry. It's wondeful and you're an amazing author...you need to update so I can compliment you some more!

--Keiri

I like this chapter a lot. I like the whole story, but I like this chapter more than others. It seems that the writing in this chapter is much better. That is NOT to say that in the other ones the writing was bad, but it seems to me in the other chapters the writing style was more casual. But in this chapter it flows really well and it's really well-written. As if something that could actually be from a book. You said not to ask you to update sooner, so I won't:) Plus I'm terrible with updates myself. But when you do finally update I'll be sure to read it:)

this is good

...that took forever! But thanks for the update...then next one better be quicker!

Oh, I like it so far. (:

Okay, so here's the deal. You are not the first author I have had to mention this to. I am not going to read any more of your story. This DOES NOT mean it wasn't good. In fact, I enjoyed it a heck of a lot. But honestly, I CAN NOT survive another death of Johnny Cade. Really, I can't. So, I am going to leave you with these two things of advice: one, me telling you to shut up about sucking. You don't, and nor does your writing. I am under the impression that both are quite cool. Two, change this story to "M" because this is past "T" actually, it probably has been for many, many, chapters, lol.

rock on,
indie

Oh My Goodness! Oh my goodness! This is like impossible FANTASTIC! I love how Johnny reacts to the things around him. I was thinking of a scene where like the rest of the gang go to visit Johnny or like Darry and Dally, possibly even Mr. Symes, or Randy and Bob OR MAYBE AL! sorry but on with the story. a nurse would be there explaining to whoever is there that Johnny reacts to the situations and people around him. Then Ponyboy walks in and doesn't see them or he could be in the room already and talks to Johnny talking about Gone With the Wind and how he got the book and began to read to him. Then the nurse would comment(Ponyboy is oblivious to all of this) that when Pony comes to read to Johnny he completly calms down and stuff. So ya thats my scene, I might have gotten it from another story but im not sure! Update soon!

Happy Writing
Leah Neal
(feel free to email me for a more detailed or easier explanation! or just because!)

i hope he doesnt die... well yea nvm... hahaha =].. short but good =]

omg,really really really awesome

Finally!

You made up from the lack of updates with the chapter.

I hope Johnny's ok :(

UPDATE SOON! Please...

--Keiri

I missed this story... and I hope you update soon :]
It was a good but somewhat confusing chapter.

please write more soon

oh man please, please dont kill johnny i love him [not really in love thing but really connect type thing] i cant lose him in this story too...please

wow i just wanted to say that i am amazed at the story so far... i really really really like it =]