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| The-Fan-Who-Lived 2008-04-05 ch 12,  | abuseOh My Goodness! Oh my goodness! This is like impossible FANTASTIC! I love how Johnny reacts to the things around him. I was thinking of a scene where like the rest of the gang go to visit Johnny or like Darry and Dally, possibly even Mr. Symes, or Randy and Bob OR MAYBE AL! sorry but on with the story. a nurse would be there explaining to whoever is there that Johnny reacts to the situations and people around him. Then Ponyboy walks in and doesn't see them or he could be in the room already and talks to Johnny talking about Gone With the Wind and how he got the book and began to read to him. Then the nurse would comment(Ponyboy is oblivious to all of this) that when Pony comes to read to Johnny he completly calms down and stuff. So ya thats my scene, I might have gotten it from another story but im not sure! Update soon! Happy Writing Leah Neal (feel free to email me for a more detailed or easier explanation! or just because!) |
| CookieLover92 2008-03-27 ch 12, | abusei hope he doesnt die... well yea nvm... hahaha =].. short but good =] |
| Deanaholic1 2008-03-24 ch 12, | abuseomg,really really really awesome |
| Keiri Bradon 2008-03-24 ch 12, | abuseFinally! You made up from the lack of updates with the chapter. I hope Johnny's ok :( UPDATE SOON! Please... --Keiri |
| Maddiecake 2008-03-24 ch 12, | abuseI missed this story... and I hope you update soon :] It was a good but somewhat confusing chapter. |
| blue moon 2008-02-10 ch 11, | abuseplease write more soon |
| CookieLover92 2008-01-03 ch 11, | abuseoh man please, please dont kill johnny i love him [not really in love thing but really connect type thing] i cant lose him in this story too...please |
| CookieLover92 2008-01-03 ch 7, | abusewow i just wanted to say that i am amazed at the story so far... i really really really like it =] |
| Keiri Bradon 2008-01-02 ch 11, | abuse:O Yes, it makes up for the lack of updates. :) Very good chapter, please update soon. |
| JohnnyPonyboy 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abuseOMG... I love the first chapter. |
| Maddiecake 2008-01-01 ch 11, | abuseYay for updates! :] So, you had some paragraph problems, it looks like, because you didn't space them out. It was kind of confusing to follow, but I'm glad they finally found him (seriously, I thought he was gonna die). Hope you don't kill him off, or if you do, you have something angsty happen during it. Or... y'know what? Just... don't kill him off, I'm begging you xD |
| WHPIAR 2007-12-02 ch 10, | abuseThis is the first "Outsiders" fanfic I've ever read, and I think it's very good. I feel so bad for Ponyboy and Johnny. I love Sodapop's character. I can't wait to read on. Very interesting alternative. b |
| Maddiecake 2007-11-30 ch 10, | abuseOH GOOD GOD YOU UPDATED. Seriously, I've been waiting for an update from you for I don't know HOW long and you finally bring it! Except... you gave a sort of cliff hanger (damn cliffs...) but oh well. All this means is that you'll have to update sooner and good for Bob and having a heart! |
| greaserlove 2007-11-30 ch 10, | abuseI just started this story...but let me say BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO. It's SO great, wow...When I was on Chapt. 4 I was told to go help with the xmas tree (believe me, I LOVE xmas) and I actually only put up two decorations 'cause I wanted to keep reading thing. UPDATE soon, is all I ask! |
| A Quick Death Will Never Co... 2007-11-20 ch 1, | abusePOV means point of view. its ok it took me 2 months to figure that out omg that went really fast. it was good though |