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| ilovetowriteSMP 2007-05-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseAll I read are R and R stories. I thought this was incrediably sweet and piognant. |
| RossnRachel4everr 2007-05-24 ch 1, | abuseoh definitely keep it up! i love it |
| Liason723 2007-05-24 ch 1, | abuseI think you did a great job you should write lobsters more often |
| Imagine what if 2007-05-24 ch 1, | abuseI don't know what to say. This phone conversation tells us so much ... and yet so little. They are stillobviously freinds, parents an so much more. Your words tells us they still love each other ... yet they do not explain why they still live apart, separated by the Atlantic. I have but one question: Why do you not ususally write about the lobsters? Chandler and Monica's relationship seemed to work well, they fell in love and got married. They had their problems but, for the most part, it was "normal". Ross/Rachel on the other hand was ANYTHING but normal. So much angst, so much confusion, so many unsaid thoughts, so much raw love. So much to write about. Thanks for this wonderful snapshot of a telephone conversation. Too bad it's just a one-shot. |
| bundespy 2007-05-24 ch 1, | abuseGreat beginning, this phonecall is really great... keep it going please |