Bra part was hillarious :D

its a sweet story ^^ very nice =)

SO CUTE! Nice work ^^

that was really cute ^^

sweet very nice, but M is a little over the edge, but it's good for safty at the end, clean but qestionble

Collective "aaws" all around. That was cute. I loved the part when Ron was going on about the bra. The tone seemed a bit uncohesive but I think that's what I loved about it-- it felt kind of collage-y. I don't know how to explain it, but it was very cute. I liked it a lot.

AW adorable! It was funny to think about the 3 of them stuffed in a tent.

Really good. I liked it.

this was really good
i like that they didnt have to kiss or anything too
it was just a tender sort of ron and hermione moment

favorites for sure

Oh. I feel stupid for reading this, but IT WAS SO GOOD!

I loved this! It was very well written.

That was a god story. And it made me laugh at certain points.
You should write a sequel to it.. hem hem... What happens next? Maybe Harry went out to get some wood to start a fire?
Just saying...lol


LizzWeasley

this story is amazing. it took my breath away.

Cute! Liked it a lot, although I'm actually not a massive fan of RonxHermione, but this was really good! Faves! x

this is a really great story, but you leave out commas and they are a bit ooc in the beginning