This was very entertaining. You make the characters three dimensional and interesting. You're a sophisticated writer! Thanks for this.

Excelent, very in-character, and well told

I love how you write Ritsuko in your fics.. Please more?
:D

This was good. I saw no real errors and you got the story across very well.

It's easy to picture Ritsuko as that smiling friend waiting at the bar, and it's impossible not to picture Kaji as the somewhat smarmy guy who drags her out onto the dance floor. I enjoyed reading this quite a bit. It was a well thought out idead and the details you put into it were nice.

the only quable I have with it is the likeliness of anyone sneaking a file onto Ritsuko's laptop. It would have been more believable if Kaji had downloaded the file off the internet, or streamed it or something.

but besides that one point it was a good story.

awie... that was so sweet !! n_n

Beautifully written. And the banter is very very cute, I'm itching to see Evangelion all over again. Your story was like the extended scene when Kaji and Ritsuko met again after all those years, so I could really imagine it.

Let's go take some dance lessons!

^~ Bravo, encore encore,
- Your number 1 fan

Wow...I gotta say, when you nroguht this little project to me i was intirgued, it was a very good story, well thoguht, nicely written...some errors, nothing too big, and then I gave you a bit of advise...
And I just gotta say I loved how you made them your own; you twisted them, molded them, bent the ideas to your will, made them work for the story, no into the story and I juts loved what you did...
We should team up again some time R, I reall y have a blast writing with you.
Cheerio
EB

This was nice and well writen. There are very few fics were Kaji and Ritsuko get together. Good job.