Ah! This story was great, but way too short! There was so much more you could have done with it! I was so looking forward to a much more developed relationship between Anna and Erik, as well as much more developed relationships between her and the other characters too! Sequel maybe? I hope so! You've got some great characters and a great premis happening! I hate to see it end so soon!

Are you going to do a sequel? You should. "Till we meet again." So laid it open for one.

Whoa I got goosebumps at that last part. But I really, really like it so far.

Cool! :D

I kinda like the Erik-the-Supernatural-Immortal-Being idea. Nice ending. 10/10

OGT/JS

10/10. I was kindasorta hoping she'd get the other chorus boy. ah wel.

JS

Very good! One thing, if Anna was eight, and you said Erik was her age when Annalise got him out, that would ake him eight, and Annalise was fourteen.BUT! Erik is only 3 years younger than Annalise, which wuld have made him eleven when she broke out. So that was the only thing. I, with my spelling-hawk eyes, didn't find any spelling or grammar mistakes! Up top! 1/10

JS

*fangirl squeal* I really hope Erik's next chappie! This should be good! XD

Ooh! Cliffy! Update soon!

I love your simplistic way of writing! I wish I had that ribbon!! ;o;

This is amazing darling. You really outdid yourself. Thanks for cheering up my night. I love you!! And thank you so much for the dedication. It means alot.

wow, cool story! this is a great way to introduce the story of the Phantom to someone, & bringing in a relative of Madame Giry is a great idea.

Hmm. Interesting. :D
Kristy is annoying and sadly not horribly exaggerated. *sigh* :(
Update soon please!

I liked it! Keep up the good work!
BTW, you had a few grammar/spelling errors, but nothing major. :D

O, o, o!! Excitement~~!