Got Time Lord? Oh, don't we wish? it just isn't FAIR...anyway...

lovely premise! Keep going, my dear!

nice! i love the things that the Doctor says! good job

Nicely done! I've been craving an original character story that wasn't of my own making.

Please update soon!

Oh wow! Still love this, this chapter was great! Yay, please update again soon!

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I always love the reacting people have to the TARDIS, it's always priceless. Those aliens are just icky... giant centipedes? I never liked them, now I know the reason! =P I'm excited to know what the Doctor and your OC are going to meet next.

Great work, Clover! I like your OC, she's very interesting, and, of course, I love the Doctor! =)

That was awesome, i love that he isnt sure that the NAA really exists.

good story so far! i wanna see where it goes!

Wow! Yeah, please do continue, I'd like to see where this is going! :D

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