I really liked this, it was really really well written, good job! :D

lol!the moms r like finally it happened! thats funny and weird!

AWWW! That was so cute i loved it please continue to write for this couple you are very good:)

Please continue to write in the future;)

SorrisoD'amore

Cliff hanger cant wait to read whats next

Loved it! Oliver's such a boy! When he saw her naked, and she was embarrassed and he was like, "Why wasn't she as happy as he was?" Ha-ha, that had me laughing. Cute!

Oh, I love it. I mean, I like it because Lilly and Oliver are so sweet to each other. Haha. :)!

OMG! that was ah-mazing good job go Ollie! You got it going on and I would not want that to happen to me with my crush I would be mortified good job lol I love this story like a fat kid love cake.

aw. [:

that was adorable! :D

Aw, I liked it.

I was worried you were going to make them do something naughty. Glad you didn't. :)

The ending rocked. Good job!

that was really sweet and i liked the ending too.

:)

Wow. That was beautiful. I'm absolutely speechless and on the verge of tears. Thank you for this.

Nice ending! I like it!

I Lurve This! I LUV LOLIVER 2! :) its awswsome.

totally awesome story!

You should write a story for Lilly! Like, she should walk in on Oliver or something!

Either way awesome story!

I hope you do another one like this! Lilly need something to see!

Aww, poor Lilly.

Good story, by the way! :D