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Reviews for: Unfinished Business
Vanessa Osbourne 8/3/10 . chapter 1
THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL! *Starts crying and clapping* Epic win! Epic win! *cries some more*
Boudicca of Green 2/28/10 . chapter 1
I love this! It's very well writen and had my insides squirming with the changing emotions you were able to bring forth. This needs more reviews though, sorry their aren't more :(
AngelBornOfHell 11/23/09 . chapter 1
it's (sniffles) so SAD!
JigokuHana 11/19/07 . chapter 1
OH GOD! This made me cry! So beautiful & sad at the same time! T_T
TheMarshmaloWizardGhostCookie 7/20/07 . chapter 1
man you write good stories!
TheRealSnowWhite 5/30/07 . chapter 1
awh...

thats so sweet!

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It's-a-small-world 5/26/07 . chapter 1
Brilliant.
Aloha 5/24/07 . chapter 1
The lesson that James Nightingale (Emily's father) learned, was that instead of losing himself in his work every night, he should have been watching his daughter more closely.

Good Job D.M.Robb. Enjoyed reading your very descriptive story.
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