This story is so awesome! It is well written and ties the two stories together really well. Good on ya! I look forward to going over to the next one and reading more.

Skit:

Burnzs: My gosh, this writing... I-its INCREDIBLE!

VINcedible: No, but real close.

This is such a freaking cool story.

But...

there are so many typos that it is a bit hard to read. I have to stop in the middle of the action just to figure out that if means of.

Great story though!

Awesome story. I can't to read the sequal.

very very good story man... looking forward to reading the sequel

loved the story. loved the action. loved everything about it. Hope you keep writing these great stories. :)

wow

Definitely noticed the Bleach and One Piece references in this chapter. Very nice job.

Does Ron even know about the you know what yet?

So he's still not getting Rufus?

So he isn't going to get Rufus and not meet up with Kim? What's that going to do to the Possible universe?

i think i got the hint. and great chapter its really funny!

What was the 1st time Akatsuki had to kidnap Ron? Awasome story!

Another awasome ch I hope Ron uses the Cursed seal again and use the demons ki as too!

I hope Ron uses the Curse seal that would be awasome and his demon too!

The Shoutengan eye is pretty cool and Ron fellen alsleep with ink on his face lol!