 Saffygirl 2009-02-11 . chapter 1Cool oneshot! |
 Ivy3 2007-08-23 . chapter 1What a sweet and useful birthday present! I can just imagine John sending that to him, but both of them still stubborn and refusing to budge. I wonder if Dean sent him anything. |
 MeShelly 2007-07-30 . chapter 1Cute almost-reconciliation. I really liked how it was John that called, and that even if he misses his family and *does* love his father, the irritation comes immediately. I also liked how they both obviously have unresolved issues, but still--they do care.
~Michelle |
 Little-Lommy 2007-05-31 . chapter 1Aw, this was nice, and also kinda sad. I know they work things out in the end but I can totally imagine it was like his, good work! :) x |
 sammygirl1963 2007-05-24 . chapter 1Awesome oneshot. I reckon the care package and call was just John's way of telling Sammy he still loved him, even if they did holler at each other. It took a lot for John not to lose it and tell Sam to "be careful" |
 Romilly McAran 2007-05-24 . chapter 1 While that is an interesting look on the John/Sam relationship you completly cut out Dean. You wrote as if there was no brother.
Sure you MENTIONED him but that was not really Dean. Dean loves his brother enough to sell his soul for him, to only have a year left to live and doesn't see anything wrong with that. Dean would always care for Sam. Sam has left him! That has hurt him. And Sam has to know that... well... perhaps not... he can be pretty blind when he want s to be... too much like his father.
Otherwise I like (but I'm a Dean girl: Sorry for having to complain, but...). |
 Ghostwriter 2007-05-24 . chapter 1Awesome. Catch ya on the flip side. |