Is a cool story. I like the repeated references to Lucifer's eyes, it gives a great feeling of what he'd be like. Plus, Hastur is so thuggish and Hastur-ly. All in all, damn good.

short and sweet.. i like it

Nice fic. Seems a likely way that Crowley would fall. Congrats on writing the 6th Good Omens fic! (I do hope you don't take offense to that, it's just a reference to the fandom). LOL. I LOVE the way you described Lucifer in the beginning.

I *like* your Lucifer. He is, after all, the Devil, not just a once-angel. I'm not entirely convinced by your Crowley, but I can see the motivation, and I really like the image of moving names on lists. The eyes are very effective, but a little too often refered to in such a short piece. Hastur is perfect (in a Hellish way, of course).